100 wc #3

”Oh my god Ollie,” said my best friend Ty. ”That looks pretty smashed up, i’ll go get the super glue and maybe we can try put it back together” I was just about to take a photo of Ty’s beautiful puppy named Roxy. She has a shinny brown coat, and a bright green collar. As I grabbed my camera it slipped out of my hands, onto the hard concrete floor. I was so worried My mum is going to kill me I thought to myself as I picked up the broken pieces of the lens.

BTN #3 Federation

It was only 116 years ago that Australia became a whole county. A lot of people were debating it because they thought that new south wales and Victoria would have all the power because they had they most population in their states. the reason why they wanted to join to make one whole country is because they be stronger if all their army joint together and because trading would be a lot more effective. when each state ran as their own you couldn’t even take a train from Victoria to Brisbane because the train tracks were different sizes. I understand why all the states formed together to make a stronger community. Why were the aboriginals so left out, were they a threat to the British?

Key:

Red= Recall

Blue= Understanding

green= Question

100 WC #1

My best friend johnny is always talking to me in class. he sits right next to me and the teacher always gives me this look to say ”i know your up to something.” After two full hours of listening to miss boring take a maths lesson its finally time for lunch. I have a delicious ham cheese sandwich that i cant wait to sink my teen into. but i need to be the first table to get my lunch. johnny starts talking to me and the teacher says ‘your table will be last to get your lunch. And that is why i’m always last.

BTN/ Convicts Stealing #2

When the convicts were sent off to Australia a lot of people though they had it easy, they worked for a period of time building, and once the had served there sentence they got to live a life there. This made people in Britten want to be transported so they did crime and purposely got caught. The ruler of England didn’t want that so instead of sentencing them transportation they would just put weights on their necks, wrists and ankles to make it really hard to walk. some people even die from the pain. In the jails a lot of people got sick and it spread. I understand why a lot of people wanted to  be transported because poor people in Britten had to steal to survive and if they got caught they would have horrible punishments that can lead to death. Why didn’t they just transfer all the criminals to Australia? If they did they would get a lot more done there.

KEY 

Red= Recall 

Blue= Understanding

Green= Question

BTN- First Fleet/Encounter #1

In 1788 8 ships set sail from England to Australia, 5 of those ships where filled with about 100 convicts and about 20 of them where children, the other three ships where filled with supply to get through the 8 month journey to Australia and hopefully start a colony in Australia. the ship had such hard conditions, a lot of people got sick and there wasn’t a lot of water so people died of dehydration. On each ship about 20 people didn’t make it to Australia. Once they docked at botany bay they notices that other people where there. some of then has paint art on their body and the convicts where quite scared. the aboriginals has never seen anyone these there people and didn’t like them because they used things like guns and weapons the aboriginals weren’t familiar to. I understand how the aboriginals felt when new people ambushed the land they owned. If aboriginals could speak English would they work together with the convicts?  

Key:

Red= Recall

Blue= Understanding

Green= Question