BTN #3 Federation

It was only 116 years ago that Australia became a whole county. A lot of people were debating it because they thought that new south wales and Victoria would have all the power because they had they most population in their states. the reason why they wanted to join to make one whole country is because they be stronger if all their army joint together and because trading would be a lot more effective. when each state ran as their own you couldn’t even take a train from Victoria to Brisbane because the train tracks were different sizes. I understand why all the states formed together to make a stronger community. Why were the aboriginals so left out, were they a threat to the British?


Red= Recall

Blue= Understanding

green= Question

BTN/ Convicts Stealing #2

When the convicts were sent off to Australia a lot of people though they had it easy, they worked for a period of time building, and once the had served there sentence they got to live a life there. This made people in Britten want to be transported so they did crime and purposely got caught. The ruler of England didn’t want that so instead of sentencing them transportation they would just put weights on their necks, wrists and ankles to make it really hard to walk. some people even die from the pain. In the jails a lot of people got sick and it spread. I understand why a lot of people wanted to  be transported because poor people in Britten had to steal to survive and if they got caught they would have horrible punishments that can lead to death. Why didn’t they just transfer all the criminals to Australia? If they did they would get a lot more done there.


Red= Recall 

Blue= Understanding

Green= Question

100WC #20

I walk in my old house and think of the memories I’ve had over the years. there was the statue of the bird where I saved it from a fire. There was a statue of my uncle Joe, he was my favorite uncle. But the best one of all was my best friend Sam. He past away a few years ago and I never ever regret anything about him. I have a quiet moment just thinking about what we have done together and give my best wishes to him. I really did love him.


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BTN {Animal Testing} #20


  • An estimated 250,000,000 billion dollars are spent on pasts, gels and spays that make your face and body prettier.
  • But before any products hit the shelves, company’s have to make they are safe to use. This is where animals testing comes in, animals have to be tested to see if the products work.
  • Animal testing is actually legal in 80 % of the world, even Australia. But Australian made beauty product have a sign that says NO ANIMALS TESTED in the package.


  • I understand that animals have to be tested and not humans so they don’t get hurt or scared
  • I understand why people would like animals being torched so their products are safe.


  • What would be the outcome if we banned all animals from being tested and just use other things?

100WC #19

as the flame flickered and then went out it just made the situation worse and my heart races faster and faster. I’m on the floor looking around me, making sure nothing pops out of the dark. I hear the floor squeaking like something is coming towards me, wind fills the air outside and a bolt lightning shines through the house and I see a man in the corner but only for a split second as the lightning goes away. Another strike of lightning comes and I see the man about ten meters closer. I make my escape but don’t know where the man will be next…

BTN {Dory In Danger} #19


  • Finding Nemo was a really popular movie and was about a fish trying to escape captivity but it actually inspired more people to have a clown fish as a pet.
  • Scientists say that after finding nemo was made about million clown fish were taken from the wild.
  • the new movie finding dory is also said to be to a threat to blue tanks if it gets as popular as finding nemo


  •  I understand the danger that blue tank might be in.
  • I understand that if we keep taking tropical fish it is a threat to their species


  • If they knew the dangers that will happen to the fish then why did they make a second movie?

100WC #18

I was waiting anxiously for my brother to get his pyjamas on so we could watch the new year’s eve fireworks from the balcony. The whole family sat in silence we heard an explosion in the sky, instead of seeing the orange glow of fireworks, we saw a bolt of lightning flash across the sky. Then it starts raining down hard and there are huge puddles on the ground, It’s almost like we could of swam in them. We all got a big scare when we hear the thunder. My mum suggests to get the umbrella but we all say it will just ruin the moment.

BTN {Tree Day} #18


  • Trees are a really important thing in our world, without them, non of us would be here.
  • Unlike us, trees breathe in carbon dioxide and breathe out oxygen.
  • Less carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is one way of slowing down climate change.


  • I understand that trees are really important and are home for some animals.
  • I understand that it is a big danger if we keep chopping down trees.


  • What would the world look like if we didn’t have any trees or plants.

100WC #17

”Yes” I made it to the last level in Mario bro’s but it was just impossible to get through it. I step on a platform and it teleports me to another. All I see is a staircase and there is no where else to go but up. Is this it? did I win? I ask myself. it seems like it taking forever but I take my final step. I see two words, YOU WIN. ”Yeah” I won and got all three giant star coins. Four hours of hard work gets a reward.

BTN {free range eggs} #17


  • Farmers have to follow certain rules to label their eggs as free range.
  • Some farms have 1500 chickens per hectare and some have 15000 in the same space.
  • The rules have now changed, farmers are only allowed 10000 chickens per hectare.


  • I now understand that farmers have to inform the buyers of how much space their chickens have to roam around by printing it in the carton the eggs are sold in.
  • I understand why people like to eat free range eggs.


  • I wonder how the chickens would feel if they were not free range?